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Wow, it's been sooooo long since I posted anything here. Hehe, yeah, I'm embarrassed of this story now, at least a bit, I wish I had gone the single girl route which eventually led to a female dominated harem. I could tell I only did this for fap material which is alright but I now get where the hate for my story came from. So, I may delete this story and do a redo of it just to be more intelligent and have things lead to the fapping as opposed to just saying "Here's a story, have fun fapping to the characters you love dominating Naruto and an OC." I'll be sure to keep all these reviews in mind while writing the next one, thank you for listening.

I have never felt bad after reading a fanfic until now the fact that Naruto had the will to live made me feel bad for him even more

Every time I read a chapter I am constantly wondering how Naruto even has the will to live.

good to see femdom, keep it up.

Nice series, I really like this. I got a story of my own on writing.com that I'd love to see some of your work on. I'll send you a link.

Seems like an interesting premise. I don't know of that many NarutoFemdom stories. However, you might not know this but, while uploading the formatting of the text went all awry. It's very difficult to read it this way. Perhaps an extra space between paragraphs might be in order. I had the same thing happen to my stories, it takes some fidgeting but it will pay out in the end.