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Do a Mebuki chapter next. Also in a future chapter do you think you can also do Yuka Yamanaka?

That was quite good, but I have a question. In your Time Stop Story, can you make it so that Naruto doesn't give a damm about whetter or not pregnancy ruin the life of his targets? It would be a nice change. ANd update Demon Dirty Dream too.

Great update. I'm glad the Naruto's two slaves made an appearance. I hope to see some Hinata getting dominated by Naruto next chapter. Whatever you decide to do for the next update I can't wait to read it.

OMGanewchapter. Words explaining how much I loved the chapter.

But seriously, amazing chapter. I was waiting for a chapter with Yoshino or Tsunade, or both ;)

Hey man, just a bit of a fan of your fics. You said you were feeling a bit ill. I hope that turns out okay and it's not anything serious. If it is serious, then I hope you'll get better. It can be horribly frustrating, depending on the illness, but a long as it's not terminal I have all the confidence that things'll turn out all right.

If it is bad, I know we don't even know eachother, but I'd like to let you know that you can talk to me. I went through chemo for 3 years, recently, for Leukemia, so I can probably relate if it's something like that.

If it's just something like the flu, then i'm glad it's just something that tame.

For hinata you could have naruto catch her in the act of watching him and another have sex and then have him be a softish dom to hinata

Great chapter. I would love to see Naruto help Ino explore her submissive side.

Could be a Yoshino, or it could be a Mebuki? Why not both? A MILF Threesome would be pretty awesome.

Hehe. . .about chapter 21, the surprise will come when Tsunami's child its born, as rather than a blonde or blackhaired boy/girl, it will be a REDHEAD. Only then as the recriminations come, Tazuna will fall in account WHO it the father, as he will then remember the known trait of the Uzumaki Clan, namely their Red Hair. . .and the surname of Naruto. He didn't link him with the ancestral Uzumaki due to the blonde hair. . .

.....hmm very interesting start