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That was fantastic. Can't wait for more!

A very interesting story, I'm no native speaker so I can't give an accurate evaluation of your grammer et cetera but I read many fanfictions in English and believe I can safely state that you have a really nice writing style, something rare in a story without real plot, but so it's no surprise that you just wrote this to distract you from a writing block on other stories. I myself like to read fanfictions entirely without smut but sometimes some PWP fanfiction is appreciated, especially when it's written like yours. I like your idea and I myself try to predict what happens next. It's almost kind of sad to know you wrote it as distraction because I kind of like to now what happens now with Naruto especially because I have so many predictions when you wrote you kinda know chapter 2 will be Naru/Sasu and the mention of a ritual, so I hope that even when you only wrote it to distract yourself and I fully understand this decision, that you find time to continue this story. I only wanted to make sure you know, there are some out there who appreciate this story.