rate_review Reviews

Well it's a bit too slow of a build up here, plus the chapters are kind of on the short side a few of them could have just been merged to make the chapters longer and I think the slow build will turn off some people. I kind of started skimming since with so many questions without answers it gets a bit on the dull side. I'm not even sure where she is as the way you described where she was could have been better. Is she supposed to be that huge underground area we saw in the manga/anime or some other places? Plus how come she never once used any kind of jutsu? Also why is he wasting his time with all of this instead of fighting? It just seems odd that he just stops his plan before it's completion to do something like this.

Very slow developing story. I wish you the best on future chapters.