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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I guesse this story is like completely dead
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame this story seems to be abandoned despite the second chapter being "ready to be uploaded" almost a month ago. It has great potential and I would have loved to see where you were going with it.
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This looks really promising. I like how you've translated the ninja=mobster from canon, the background sections as each character is introduced does a good job of setting the scene for the AU. It's a real relief to see a well formatted and coherently written piece of writing, unlike too many fics on this site, especially with a great premise like this one. I also see Fugaku's second child is now female, perhaps another angle for A to get his revenge *grin*
I look forward to the rest of your story and any others you may have to share.
I look forward to the rest of your story and any others you may have to share.
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March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
do you have a plan for saluki or something along those lines? Because the first chapter gives me that impression.
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March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
plz write more have naruto fuck her
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March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Come on full chapter please
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
and so it begins
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Seeing Mikoto getting turned into a cock hungry slut turns me on so much. Your doing great man, keep it up.
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
1st time and english ain't your 1st language. It's pretty damn good:P.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great job,good writing.Looking forward to the next chapter.