rate_review Reviews

Lol @ the chapter being "monstrously long"
I vote for death! Death to the Uchiha!

Another good chapter however from the way it was ended it appears Naruto is about to get his first male slave. Also I would like to suggest that you may need to add some older woman to the mix and I would like to suggest Hana, Tsume or Anko.

I like the idea behind this story but would iy not be better if he also claimed some older woman.

Okay, as much as I like the idea for this story, I just have one major gripe. When you get to the sex scenes and such, I just can't bring myself to be interested. the scene is too quick, too little detailed, and just overall boring. Work on that a bit, and you'll be fine. I mean, this is vore and tentacles! IMAGINATION, man! Details and imagination are what hook the reader, especially for scenes like that!

I love this story so far, please say that Ino, Hinata and Tenten will soon join Sakura as Narutos love slaves?