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for Feeding Frenzy

by EvilFuzzy

person Lucius321
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why not have sasuke be turned into a female? Seeing as how he was devoured by naruto pretty sure he can be reborn as a female and have him become one of naruto's slaves
person kevin
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter I especially on how Sheke was enslaved. I also would like to suggesest that he be tansformed into a she-male
person Blehstuff
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
By one vote :-P damn. Can Shikamaru die at least? Doesn't have to be soon but, at some point?
person Me, me, me
schedule December 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
While I would love to see what you'd do killing Sasuke, I think that would quickly kill your story - who would take blame for being only 3 people in region and one ending missing, what with Orochimaru, what with Itachi, what with Team 7.
Unless you're going to just make lots of NaruPeople moments where he eats everyone and what those various people think while dying, without any plot - you know, typical Harem story.
person Zweig
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yo,

I like your story so far. It is quite different to other Storys which makes it even more interesting.

For the Harem of Naruto please use:

Sasuke
Haku
Shikamaru
Ino
Hinata
Neji
Hanabi
Anko
Tayuya
Kimimaro
Itachi
Gaara
Temari
Renten
Fuu
Yugito
Samui
Karui
Konohamaru
Yakumo
Juugo
Suigetsu
Karin
Deidara
Nagato
Konan

Please use my suggestions and update soon.
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Normally I'm not a big fan of vore but for some reason I can't stop reading this. As for your question I say make Sasuke his vore slave like Sakura. Partly because I'm curious to see where it goes and partly because there aren't enough bi harem stories. I know you don't NEED Sasuke in there but I think it'd be a good starting point. But you're the author so you do whatever you want. Either way please update soon.
person Spyash2
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For Sasuke, I'd say off him. Kurama hates the Uchiha with a passionand I don't see letting Naruto allowing him to live.

If you're taking suggestions you could have Naruto encounter an alone Yugito or Fu during a solo mission. It would be interesting to see how Naruto submits either of them when they have Matatabi/Chomei backing them.
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'd rather like to see Sasuke live as a sacrifice, probably ending up as a sissy to Naruto or a shemale (Kurama maybe getting a kick out of doing so to the 'last' Uchiha)
person Sapphiros
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kill him! And have Naruto begin taking over the leaf in a way reminiscient of Danzo! By enslaving ninjas and have them answer to no commands but his.

But im biased anyways. I hate Sasuke.
person Sho
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Vore slave. Please make him a vore slave. The world needs more sub sasuke.

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