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You know, given you have such an imagination (no matter how twisted) like this, and your "A Lewd New World" story, I was wondering if you would make a story based off of these images below and if course expand on them with that imagination of yours.

http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1080993#search=Yugito_Nii
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1090722#search=Yugito_Nii
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1118820#search=Yugito_Nii
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1119454#search=Yugito_Nii

Damn. I feel like I enjoyed this a lot more than I should have. Very kinky. I guess the Hyuga are going to have to suck up to one of the other clans if they don't want to be left behind. So I guess Naruto is going to have three more slaves waiting for him to eat them when he gets back. It's perfect. You have girly boy Neji, sweet innocent Hinata, and cute loli Hanabi, all just waiting to be eaten, corrupted, and turned into slaves. Please make it happen. Even if you don't please update soon.

Although I am a little surprised by what has happened in this chapter it was still a very good filler. Although I do wonder what will happen when Naruto and the gang return to the village. Will he have any more slaves with him or will he reach an agreement with Wave to send him regular sacrifices. Also how many of the Clans will make agreements with him for there daughters to marry into his growing family.

I think a sacrifice of Zabuza would be cool and very rare. I've seen lots of stories where Zabuza comes to the leaf or when he's killed, but never one where he's made a sacrifice. Haku as either male or female would make a lovely sacrifice for Naruto. So long as Naruto's not making EVERYONE of note a meal, this will hold my interest. It gets boring when there isn't anyone left for anyone else. What will Sasuke do when they meet up with Itachi? I don't think Orochimaru would be very tasty but Kabuto might be. I think it would be very different if Naruto somehow freed all those who the Snake used as bodies if he ate the guy. If you remember in the manga they're trapped in that weird dimension of the Snake's. That would be something I've never seen done before.

Alright a new chapter and a very good one to. Although I would not have killed him but it seems that Naruto could always bring him back to life. Also I just wonder who Haku is and what he or she is going to do?

how about after the wave arc sakura and sasuke ask hinata to talk to them and she somehow ends up being a gang-bang living sacrifice for naruto?

I had the chance to think about it some more and I think that Naruto should have Sakure use the Sharingan on Tazune and Kakashi so they will do what ever Naruto tells them to do. I also think that Naruto needs keep Haku alive either as Naruto's sacrifice or as a slave of the Sharingan.

Another excellent chapter. I was just thinking about what you could have happen now. What if you had the Uchiha use his eye limit on Kakashi and the clients family. Naruto could also start up a cult in Wave that worships the Fox. Would he not obtain more power from having worshipers and people willing to do anything to get out from under Gato's rule. Also he could capture the ninjas that they will encounter in wave, but instead of sacreficing them uses the Uchiha to turn them into his slaves without killing them.

Another excellent chapter especially with what Sesuke went through. I think that Sesuke needs to ask his master to change his sex to where he he will be a she-male. That way he can now have sex with both of his teammates, I also think you should explore the effects of Naruto having Sesuke's bloodline limit at his command.

Kakashi is practically on crack in this XD. I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto actually takes his advice and hunt the other Biju and their jinchuuriki and devour/make them his slaves. I hope that's what he does to Fuu and Yugito if he encounters them. The enslavement part, not the devouring.