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August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read your story and find it cool. Btw can you add Mebuki Haruno Sakura's mom? I would like that. Till next time.
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April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories. i see that you have not made a Karin chapter yet, i would like to read that one.
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April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
any chance of FemSasu+FemItachi threesome OwO
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April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
'Tenten was amazed. Naruto knew how to act like a gentleman.'
Um, this part seems rather jarring.
'Once they entered and checked with the maître’d Naruto again showed he was a gentleman as he pulled Tenten’s chair out for her then once she was seated he sat down himself. '
And, given the usage here, unnecessary.
Well, here is a piece of a review. Collect all and you'll get a special prize!
*No way meant to imply anything about the story, but to the busybodies checking the names. Wait, you checked the name, didn't you?
Um, this part seems rather jarring.
'Once they entered and checked with the maître’d Naruto again showed he was a gentleman as he pulled Tenten’s chair out for her then once she was seated he sat down himself. '
And, given the usage here, unnecessary.
Well, here is a piece of a review. Collect all and you'll get a special prize!
*No way meant to imply anything about the story, but to the busybodies checking the names. Wait, you checked the name, didn't you?
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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice work till now keep going btw. can you add a few filler's as mebuki haruno or fuuka?
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can you do a chapter with Karin?
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continues to get worse, just terrble
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February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
May I humbly ask for a preliminary between Hinata and Naruto? Please.
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February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay another boring cookie cutter chapter, just what nth is story needed more of /s
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January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
would like to see a Mei Terumi, one with all the MILF's, and one with female kyuubi and female nibi.