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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome! Please make a chapter for Konan as well, I beg ya!*.*
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will Hinata get her date written and ever get some hot and heavy loving from Naruto???
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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, would you consider giving Naruto a new perk: Genderbent- allows player to change the gender of one other character. (The changed character may or may not remember being different, player choice) If so, it would be awesome if the character changed was Itachi. Can't imagine that NOT pissing Sasuke off.
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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay sasame. Make sure you give her somthing realy special she is my fave out of all of the female fillers
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of the story!!!!!!!!! Man hurry up abd finish it!!!!!!!! The story us awesome and only getting better, so finish it please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, but I feel that Naruto is going to have a 'wakeup call' when he realizes that beating down Sasuke is just going to make him even more angry and MORE determined to leave Konoha to find Orochimaru and kill Itachi.
Unless, of course, the elders come clean and he doesn't just off the entire village first or have to be killed while trying to do that, which I personally would support him trying to do that.
Unless, of course, the elders come clean and he doesn't just off the entire village first or have to be killed while trying to do that, which I personally would support him trying to do that.
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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update especially how you had Naruto beat the living crap out of Sasuke then after that had him take the cursed seal off of Sasuke and not have to have Kakashi carry Naruto and Sasuke back to Konoha. Just wondering when is Naruto going to be having lemons with the Konoha genin after the two year time skip or are you going to be doing that for that matter? Are you waiting for Ino, Hinata, Tenten, and maybe Sakura are older and somewhat more mature like after the time skip? Of the adults you've done Tsume, Tsunade, Tsunami, Anko, Kurenai in a genjutsu, Kyoko in the hospital, Mikoto, and I might not have named some but when are you going to be having naruto do some others like Yoshino (Shikamaru's mother), Kushina is she dead or alive or are you not into that type of stuff, or what about the other mothers of the genin? Or the other jinchûriki like Yugito nii, Fuu, and Mito, or have Naruto find Rin in a village on the trip if your going to do the trip. I don't know but keep them coming they are great chapters and exciting to read.
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
People always jump the gun with ranking in fanfiction.
S rank? Really?
Judge missions based on mission difficulty. A mission a group of genin are able to complete is not dangerous enough to be considered S-rank.
In fact, if it wasn't for Kimimaro, it wouldn't even be A-rank. Had they the jounin to send, they would have curb stomped the sound four.
I don't care as much as I should because this is mostly a smut-fic, but still, a lil annoying.
S rank? Really?
Judge missions based on mission difficulty. A mission a group of genin are able to complete is not dangerous enough to be considered S-rank.
In fact, if it wasn't for Kimimaro, it wouldn't even be A-rank. Had they the jounin to send, they would have curb stomped the sound four.
I don't care as much as I should because this is mostly a smut-fic, but still, a lil annoying.
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, no lemon for chapter 15, I would have liked to see Mikoto thanking Naruto for bringing her son back to her.
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As usual two more great chapters. Keep it the updates coming.