rate_review Reviews

It was very well written while I do agree with the sex scene not being perfect. Some people are vocal and others are not. I liked it.

I enjoyed this! Just in response to the bit at the end... Anal sex does not always hurt. Lubricant is very very very important, and all depending on how excited, and most importantly, relaxed you are, it doesn't have to hurt at all. My boyfriend was crazy for anal sex for a period a sometimes we only had spit (and my own wet excitement) for lubricant... And still no pain. However, if you're not ready for it or for some reason you can't relax, it really does hurt!! But please, don't think it has to.

Actually, anal doesn't hurt for me. First time or two, but then, not much. So it really depends on the person. And the reason you put in the dirty talk is because MEN LOVE IT. I know this guy, not a lover, who does nothing but complain when a girl he's with doesn't say anything during sex. Since this is fantasy and it's for the pleasure of the reader, you do sort of need some dirty talk. I'm like Sasuke, I hate talking, but it's what makes your lover happy.

Otherwise, congrats on the milestone. I know it took me some time to get it right and get comfortable using some words. Still hate the word 'nipple' though.

Aaww i had thought Naru was gonna ride sasuke, was such a nice set up for a sweet loving ride LOL (my bad though i didn't see the NARUsasu warning)