rate_review Reviews

Is it Ino or Sakura? Because you constantly switch between the two names. So I guess you didn't proofread this.

it's a great story for the rest, though I see no reason why you couldn't make this in-universe. All these talks about football and high school are completely unnecessary. So why not just let them remain ninjas then?

It was a great story from what i read but you mistakenly put Ino's name repetitively through the story where sakura's name should be, it starts about half way through the chapter. But all and all it's a great read :) keep up the good work