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December 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I think I could read this story over and over again without getting tired
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August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!
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December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! You updated! THANK YOU! This is without a doubt one of my favourite fan fics ever! I love it so much that every now and then I will reread the whole thing <3 please update soon!
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so out of character, both Sasuke and Naruto that it's just...god, just, I get the fact that you might not want to be a copy of the manga or anime, but they just don't have enough personality,work on that and you'd do great.
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November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is and will be one of my favourite fan fic for the years to com! <3
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just read all 8 chapters, what a great story. Please update soon. Thanks for the great read.
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't think they eat grilled cheese sandwich for breakfast in Japan, the place from where the world of Naruto was patterned, so I'm sure grilled cheese sandwich isn't a typical breakfast in Konoha. It's too... how would you call it? Americanized. Just sharing a suggestion that perhaps to make the story roll in the canon-verse, despite the change of storyline, perhaps a bit realistic details, no matter how small, should be used?
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm behind on my reaing and just got to this one today. It's wonderful! And everyone knows how much I live ItachixKakashi!
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a very nice story, grilled cheese a bit strange for japan, but a good twist. cannot wait for the next chapter
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked chapter six having Sasuke and Naruto tell eachother how much the other means ot them and that they love eachother. I can't wait to see how everyone else will react to what happened to Sasuke and to this new Sasuke too. i like this story quite a bit, I can't wait for you to update and I appreciate your fast updates, keep up the good work!