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October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
intresting. if you update please break your paragraphs so they are a bit smaller it makes them easier to read. a good ammount is usually 5-8 lines tops and maybe occasionally up to 15 lines. you can do more but it makes it hard to read and that makes some people(like me) not want to really read it.
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, I look forward to seeing how this goes. Your paragraphing is off though and future chapters should be longer.