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as if I would ever let you hang like that!”
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good stuff- like how sasuke played with naruto but also gave him pleasure and confessed his love_sweet

That was sweet and nicely written, good work.

This was a lot of fun to read and you do a great job with sex scenes, great job.

It's going really fast, but I kinda like it. I don't know if you planned it that way, or it just turned out so. But the small side i didn't like is that Sasuke was so forceful. If he does love him so, wouldn't he be more gentle?

I like the second chapter better, it rounds up the story quite nicely. And I don't see anything more to be added, since it is a short story. I like how Kairi played her part, even though she didn't show up in this one. Good job :D

I enjoyed! I'm a push over for a happy ending:) Thank you for sharing.

Well no to the PWP because there was def a plot, not just porn for the sake of porn. I'd say maybe ye bdsm, D/s bondage along those lines. def NOT Non Con though, you made it very clear naru actually wanted it and enjoyed the whole thing :)

I don't know what to call it either but I sure a heck liked it ^_^

I wouldn't call this a bdsm fic nor a pwp. Though I would tag this as non-con... or at the very least dub-con considering it can be a sensitive issue for a lot of people. better to have too many warnings than too few =)

On another note, I liked the story but I think it ended a bit abruptly, and I find myself wondering what kind of relationship Sasuke and Naruto have had up til that point considering the total lack of faith Naruto has in Sasuke. I'm left with a few questions, such as why is Sasuke acting like a prick when he actually loves Naruto? And is Naruto a self hating gay since he agrees when Sasuke says the journal is disgusting? I would really like to see a second chapter to this one