rate_review Reviews

This was a great story, I loved it! It is one of my favorites! But I couldnt help but laugh when sasuke said 'when I felt his mother on me' I laughed really loudly! As a hint, proof read your stories before you upload them, or get someone else to do it, I could if you wanted. I wouldn't mind, it's was beyond interesting ^_^

I'm interested, but you need a beta to correct grammar usage and help the story flow better. It almost killed me to try to clean it up while reading it.