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November 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is good! I don't know why no one else has reviewed. I for one would really be happy to see it finished. You kept them in character, as well as keeping their emotions realistic for the situations they found themselves in. That's a great skill. Too many authors with similar situations have the characters immediately forgive and forget the 'betrayals'. So unrealistic! I hope you keep writing, and that you finish this story. Gambatte!!