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i a huge fan i love your stories let me tell you this saga has kept me on the edge of my seat since i found it two months ago now to tell you u the truth i one of the many that hate long drawn out stories i start reading and after a while i just either skim and skip to the end or i just forget about it
but with u its not even like that sometimes im at work and i start to get giddy wondering what will happen next that i lose focus on my clients its insane i tell u the rawness of it (in a good way) just grabs u and doenst let go. the thought u must have put into it to developit the way u did is magnifficent so much so that im actually sad that this will end here, but it was a wonderful journey and i especially happy that u decided to share it with us
-Hollow_

I knew that was going to happen. Anytime someone unexpectedly pops up like that (trying to avoid spoilers here so apologies if this review is sounding vague) Orochimaru is usually involved somehow, some way. Kimimaru, for example, and Kabuto the first time we met him.

Haru handled Karura and Takara well, I think.

You don't know how happy I was when Haru mentioned wanting to have the same kind of relationship his parents have with Ran one day. I've been hoping that would happen and I will continue to root for Haru. I still think Five will give him problems, though.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

Chapter 5--Haru is still my favorite out of all of Naruto and Sasuke's children. I like Kazuki, too. As well as Yuki and Ryuu. It seems like Hoshi has a crush on Five. You'll have to refresh my memory but who does Misora belong to? I mean, who are her parents? I can't remember. Keitaro is Asuma's son, right?

Regardless, thank you for another wonderful chapter, and now I'm moving on to Chapter 6.

ASODUHASODUH FNNNNNNNNNNNG

WORDLESS WITH FEELS, MANNAH WORDLESS WITH FEELS!

hope this one goes through or you're going to have to deal with me emailing you because I am so very very sick of this site eating my reviews. /siiiiigh

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! GASP!!!!!!!! Hides eyes I no wanna look......... v.v =) Wonderful! Man it gonna get worse ain't it?? ~ sigh~ Can't wait to find out Thanks!

I love how you always turn the story to mimic what is happening in the Anime. Like when Itachi went from bad to good. I love watching the love between Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!! <3

*curses, kicking & screaming* I knew something was up. But I don't think that's really Izuna though. I can't wait for more.

Go Hoshi!

Chapter 4--I'm glad Kakashi came to Shikamaru's rescue. Hopefully, Shika can get the office redecorated in such a way that he will be happy working there. I'm kind of sad that Shika and Neji aren't "rings-and-forever". But I guess being friends with benefits isn't bad, so long as neither of them are lonely. Being lonely is never fun (I speak from experience here).

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I am moving on to Chapter 5 now.

I see an dead Uchiha in the future and a very angry Naruto. But maybe even Uchiha can learn. If the idiot continues to believe what the crazzy snake tells him, he will "gain" a ripped of head and nothing short of it.
I'm sad that the guy isn't nice but the fact that he is an old fashioned Idiot might make it easier in the end.

Oh my Gosh!!! Izuna has gone to the dark side, I'm still skeptical about it being him. And him waking up every 50 yrs allows me to understand how he knows so much. What is the end game, oh sweet baby jesus, this is not going to be good. I feel for Haru and all the children, they see the love that Sasuke and Naruto have for each other and they REALLY want it for themselves. Shoot you make ME want that kind of love. Also, now I get why Temari and Gaara's kids are the way they are. Kankuro's promiscuity and Temari's loneliness, yea not something I would be looking forward to. I can't wait till the other fetuses are brought out of stasis, I love when there are babies running around. That wolf hybrid troop nanny made me chuckle a little bit, at least she was honest. There is probably more I want to say but just can't think of them right now. THE PLOT IS THICKENING!!! ^__________^

ja ne tilll next time and keep up the good work