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by mannahpierce

person satterb
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Izuna has to pay for all the terror he's caused! I'm so glad that they were able to track Shika down, and seeing the surprise Shika had...like he didn't think anyone was smart enough to track him down. How silly. Thank you so much for this update!
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
86 - Ufff.... (a sigh of relief) I know it's just the first round but still.... It was great, so quick and succesful.
But what would the Uchiha Clan be withut Shika's scheeming? He made it all happen in 60% at least! I seriously think he did more than Sasuke himself.
It's good to have him back. Now, what about Sai? Is it really possible to turn him off? I mean, have they tried it before? Would it still be Sai after rebooting?
Sasuke took Iruka's words pretty well. And Naruto... Hmm... Good for them.

I wonder what Iruka would do if Sasuke didn't follow his 'advice'.....
person sadie237
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SQ I loved it! I was so nervous. I was like Papa I thought he was on another ship and let that one get caught. I'm so happy he came back!! I'm drained:) Sai had me worried with the what might happen if Papa went to far. Kakashi had me scared with the insane looks. Of course the most important one had his whiskers up:) I should have never let the other make me think other wise. SQ you are truly amazing!!! There was a lot of stuff going on in this chapter. You know what my favorite part was?!:) When To-chan answer Iruka-sensei 'No' and then picked up Papa:) The title was dead on. ~Bowing~ to My Space Queen of the Naruto Universe. ^_^
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A tentative happy ending right now, which is nice. I like that they are looking for alternative solutions to the CCS problem. Do we know why Centre is so powerful? Uchiha has always been a big deal for good reason but what is so scary about the CCS? It seems more like the boogey man than anything else able to instill fear from afar and make you do things you wouldn't normally do to be exempt from their notice. I would be very interested in seeing what they would want from Uchiha in return for their continued ignorance. I would also be very interested in finding out who runs the CCS.

The relationship that Shika has with both Naruto and Sasuke is really strange and interesting. There seem to be boundaries on how much affection to show or how much feeling they allow themselves to express. Makes me wonder if Shikamaru and Sasuke would be a couple if Naruto wasn't around. Same thing with Naruto and Shikamaru. Makes me want to go back to the beginning and see how their relationships began. I probably will now that the cog is in my brain. A very nice chapter, I really like it when the family works together and succeeds at their goals.
person satterb
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Go! Iruka with your sassy self! As sad as it was to have Shika leave, I still loved this chapter. What Iruka said gave me hope, and what Sai and Haru talked about doubled it. Thank you so much for updating. I'm really glad I didn't have to wait till the weekend to find out what was happening. So thank you for your kindness too. I look forward to more as always...satterb
person eilidhdawn
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 85. I saw that slightly in the author's note. XD Thank you for the Wednesday update. Gotta say I enjoyed Iruka giving Sasuke hell about Shikamaru. Maybe they will be able to bring Shika back. Anyway, thanks for the update, Mannah. It made my day to get my e-mail from you saying Chapter 85 was up. ^_^ Looking forward to the next update.
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... But seriously, Iruka is absolutely right. I'm just surprised he vent on Sasuke (well probably on Kakashi earlier too) but Naruto... I though he would be the first to NOT accept Shika's decission. He follows his heart, not logic!!! He was always the one to find solution no matter what, to fight till the end for his friends, and now what? Is Iruka the last sane person there? Damn, I love this guy. I hope he will shake them enough to move their sorry asses instead of hiding in the compound. I know they're afraid and risking, but. to let SHika go?! On Saturday I thought they would be ripping off the SPACE to find him! Shika gave them everything and they just... I just hope Naruto will take Iruka's side. I'm also curious what is Iruka going to do... He said so manny harsh things. Poor Sasuke, living with all those people walking on eggshels around him and now.... Harsh truth. His decissions are effecting lives of them all. Great power but also responsibility. Harsh lesson.... But as it had been taught (hopefully) let's find Shika now. I must admit that I hope that Sai will get his chance to shine. Maybe someone will explain to him why Shika's decission -no matter how logical - is not RIIGHT? Sai was sadly raised by children.... and Shika. He has a lot to learn and understand...
Haru without emotions - interesting concept. He would be less jealous and maybe his beloved would like him more.... (no just pure sarcasm)sorry.
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, melissen again, I forgot to say THANK YOU for the great update! Iruka was brilliant! I hope for some interesting adventures for SHika on his journey before they find him! Thanks again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Destiny
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated today. The anticipation is killing me XD;;

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