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for A Practical Demonstration

by SakikuTorakak

person Lord K
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome smut...you should definitely write more stuff like this.
I would love to see next chapter!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It was filthy and rough, and I love it. Any chance of a sequel? I'm not much for m/m, so I haven't read the other stuff you have posted, but if you write any more like this, I'd love to see them.
person DrkVrtx
schedule July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*takes off sunglasses*

Holy crap O_O
person Proto
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story! I would certainly love to see more characters pulled in and more toys used in all holes. :)
person Bruce
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My dear author,
This is, without a doubt, THE most enthralling piece of eroticism in this category. Your descriptions of the stretching, the lust-filled looks... Upon my word I was completely insensate to everything except your words on my screen. I will be the first to admit that as a male, yuri is one of the most erotic things to read about, but this was something else entirely. If you would please consider continuing this I, and I am sure others as well, would be eternally grateful.
Yours most exitedly,
Bruce
person hoplop
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, you need to write more f/f or atleast another chapter, this was amazing, better thn most
person dragonfly_dust
schedule April 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this fanfic quite awesome~! Do more! Have the character explore other sex toys!
schedule March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You did a good job. I don't like F/F, but this on was very good. You just might change my mind about F/F. Keep up the good work.
person BloodyKikyo
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the hottest things I've read in quite some time. Denial, resistance, reluctant admission, you had it all. This wasn't just sex, it was a contest of wills. Also, leaving it off with a possible continuation, almost DRAGGING people towards the next scene? Truly Riveting. I'm not much of a fan of your other works(not into the yaoi), but this was stupendous.
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing! More please!

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