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for Heart-Shaped Box

by JazzyBell

person Anon
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
would it kill you to get through an entire scene in one post?
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Happy squeal of delight!* I'm soooo looking forward to the next chapter. No pressure. ^_^
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi seems angry with her...he must think that the seduction she unknowingly gave was deliberate on her part. Now that they are alone, will he change? His anger, and the fact that he didn't drop the act after they're alone makes me wonder if he wants to teach her a lesson and make her lose her virginity while still pretending to be a stranger with henge. Unknowing that Sakura already recognized him. I am most eager to see what happens next! On a side note, I must add, that Kakashi is a horrible sensei and if Sakura sucks it's because he hasn't taught her. Same with Naruto, he's improved because he's made himself improve. Kakashi only taught tree walking and group exercises and supervised sparring. Still, will he find himself attracted to her? Sakura is an exotic beauty...and they are all alone. Will he fuck her?
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
longer chapters would be nice. The wait for the kaka/saku lemon is starting to get irritating. I've been waiting and constantly checking for updates for months now.
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So happy to have Kakashi on the scene! Can't wait for the uncomfortable, but no doubt satisfying, sex scene between them.
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo. That last sentance is so intriquging. And now knowing that there will be a sequal with Itachi . . . excitment rises.
person reader
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story! Got more depth than most of the stories you'd see around here. The way your characters are written make them well rounded, and the premise of the story itself is intriguing, not just your typical sleazefest!

Carry on please!!
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Hopping in her seat in antisapation!* You know what would be absolutly fantastic? It it was Itachi to yanked Sakura into that room, shocked recongizing her. Can't wait to see who it really is! So nice to see Kakashi again.
schedule May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm sorry to hear about your niece, but I'm glad she'll be alright. ^_^
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaw! You're killing me!!! This is a great story, not a pairing I usually go for, but the story and scenario intrigue me. Longer chapters of something! This is really great. I sooo can't wait for the first . . . encounter.

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