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by foxkitsune300

schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D'aww, go and rest! You actually update fast. It makes me happy!

Aww, Sasuke knows now! So the kid is Sai's? I still think it's Sasuke's kid...Especially since the baby was born at 8 months? Or so Naruto thinks, right? Heh. Aww, Kiba is so adorable. Happy to see his friend and carrying him to the hospital.

Hmm, so Sasuke got Sai now huh? Oh gosh I wonder what will happen to Sakura, too! She's in for it as well.
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:) yeah Sai... better run... hmmm... now about Sakura...
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good please update soon I really wanna know what happens to Sai make the bastard pay for hurting Naruto and also don't forget to punish Sakura that bitch...lol I look forward to the next chapter! Till next time!
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome.
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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Yay! He remembers! That's awesome :D And he's pissed. Damn Sakura...I wonder what Naruto is going to do to Sai. I feel like he should lure him into a trap or something.
As for Sasuke, I'm sure Naruto will reveal himself. If not right away, then soon! Great chapter by the way!
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
get him get him get him get him get him!

Soo glad Naruto remembered... and I totally did not expect the Gaara/lover thing or that Sakura was a part of the plot. Sooo like being surprised too! Kakashi isn't the first to confirm his suspicions lol.
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schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah! Payback is at hand and that pink haired jealous little twit will reap it! To bad Sai is such a shit in this story because normally I really like the character. Oh well - someone had to be the bad guy and it looks like Sai might get a foot lodged somewhere very uncomfortable. Great chapter and very much looking foward to the next one.
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story I'm loving it please update soon!
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Naruto. Hmm, I wonder about Sakura too! It's half her fault as well! Ahh, and yes Sasuke! I can't wait to see that interaction...I feel like he'd let Naruto kill Sai though. Or maybe do it himself? So Naruto won't have to deal with the guilt?

I like that you update so fast! Makes me smile.
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's an interesting idea. Hmmm, I really hope Naruto regains his memories though, and that everyone figures out who he is!

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