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If you want some direction as you said in your intro: I want Kakashi!!!! Wouldn't mind if Gaara and Neji contributed to the show as well . . .

Wow! So Ino n TenTen r a couple , nice.:3

I really love the atmosphere of Naruto's party n can't wait to c the show n also c who his 'bitch' is for the night.:d

Who is it! Who is it! I can't wait to find out!!

hi hi just passing by and i happen to see your story and gave it a go and i must say if this is your first its not a bad start truly i especially like the twist you put on the shin-obi world i don't think there a story quite like yours out there which is exactly why it gives it a fresh standard if that make any sense i also love the new a improve Naruto and how u portrait him in this sorts of gives a bit of an edge to not only him but your stories progression and take it from me not a lot of people are able to merge the lines without losing focus on a timeline so i really look forward to your next installment

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