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for Ardor

by katokachan

person lara5170
schedule September 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story but I'm afraid to look at the date it was posted. I really don't want to find that it's an abandoned story but I can't help but feel it is. I really hope I'm wrong.
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH. i cant believe u somehow sucked me into this shitty fic and then didnt even finish the fucking thing. u haven't updated in three fucking years and i bet u never see this review but FUCK YOU!!
person Killua17
schedule December 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHY!!
I need to know what happens next, I NEED TO KNOW!!
person joe
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person joe
schedule June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
why do you keep having naruto say he can take care of himself and yet he's always in trouble and needing rescuing----how did such a bitch pass police academy with top honors and youngest and most achieved- he can't seem to get out of any trouble at all unless he's rescued.

i could do without the bit between itachi and kakashi- does absolutely nothing but detract from the main story.....and itachi's interrogation technique--- why would it work ??? really stupid criminals maybe---so i don't know why you came up with that weirdness____a lot of this reads like crack fiction
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Um, update, please? I really want to know what happens.
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Keep it up =)
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Does a happy dance* So happy to see this one updated!!! I really need to see possessive Itachi take his puppydog-like Kakashi!
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(What do you guys think?)

horrible
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story!!! My man, Neji to the rescue!!! I'm so glad he did that, now I know his life will be spared by the Uchihas. Unless domeone else from his side takes him out.:)
Great work on this chapter!!!

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