rate_review Reviews

This is a really good story I can’t wait to read the rest.

more please i really like where it's going. Not that in reality i wish for dark/bad/horrible things to happen, but it would be a deep emotional development if Naruto was to be attacked perse by an extremely evil force in a gut wrenching way. by a friend? by a loved one?, or worse an evil he thought he knew, but was clueless about. And on another fan-idea randomly tossed out into the open here, what if because of his youkai/human status he becomes.......pregnant. Yah I know way out there *raises hands in surrender* sue me lol, but other than that I like to think he comes to terms with his humanity at some point, makes some friends, and finds a place to call home with his "beloved" and family.

by they way i have no problem what so ever with your story. I use to be a fanfic writer one time and know how cruel they can be. Just as well they can be kind. so good luck and start again soon. please.