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for Miracles Take a Little Time

by AngelTalion

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schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Here comes Shika-kun~ I'm glad you updated because I adore this story. :3 I wonder where Naru-chan will work. Perhaps at a day care or at a tea shop? Idk. Update soon!~
person lryne
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i never thought Fugaku will do say that! how cruel! i hope he will realize what he did wrong!

what will they do now? where will they go?

oh i like the last part, “Just jump, right to me. I promise Naruto. I promise I’ll catch you.” :)

please update soon!
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schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was so great! I'm glad Sasuke took the initiative and saved Naruto. This fic is going to be so awesome and cute. :] update soon~
person G
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jesus that was harsh. I'd like to think Sasuke is right about his father being a good man and that everything Fugaku said and did was maybe some sort of test. (Like he wants to see what Sasuke and Itachi are really made of, if either of them would try to do the right thing. I don't know.) Naruto has been close to Sasuke for years, so they should know what kind of person he is by now. But maybe Naruto suddenly taking up with Itachi when it's always Sasuke he's been close to is what made Fugaku doubt him. Sasuke is awesome for swallowing his hurt and taking action to help Naruto. But I think that at some point, Sasuke will have to tell Naruto finding out about him and Itachi going behind his back really hurt him. If Naruto is any kind of friend, he should recognize that and feel bad about it. Listening to Itachi was more important to him than being honest with Sasuke? (Bros before hos! It's the code!)

Well, what I like best about this story is that it's about Naruto and Sasuke's friendship first. That's really the most important bond here. Hopefully they will start to think of each other as more than friends much later on and not do it right I away. Their relationship just the way it is so nice in this fic that I like seeing them just as they are, as friends. And I think it would be strange if they realized their feelings quickly when they'd already had years to do so. (Like why now all of the sudden?) But them already having feelings for one another wouldn't be that good either. I think Sasuke wouldn't look as noble if he went this far for Naruto partially because he secretly wanted him for himself. And Naruto would look less like a kid who'd been tricked and more like a jerk for going for Sasuke's brother because he couldn't have Sasuke. Well that is just my opinion of course.
person angelj232000
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I really want to know what will happen to Naruto & Sasuke. Keep the chapters coming.
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Naruto and Sasuke. I'm so glad they'll get a chance to flee. I should've known this would be the situation. I wonder if Itachi will ever want the child and try taking him from Naruto.
person richon
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oohho i did'nt expect this turn in the story, but it's a good one, the escape will be fun to read!! this plot is good, see you soon with more!!
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a great beginning. i cant wait to see where this leads.
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schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story and I can't wait for more. Please update soon!
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm squeeing in delight over here!

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