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for Under the Sun

by SoulOrchard

schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking the plot so far. looking forward to see how this progresses.
but i do think you should get yourself a beta, or at least a typing program with spell- and grammar check.
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
straight and obnoxious and doesn't look too bright... wait till Sasuke meets Sakura... Sasuke will have to add downright dumb to have her as a girlfriend. Poor Naruto will have it tough overcoming all that and not realizing he's gay yet lol.
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sun burnt Sasu-chan! Lol I love it! I can't wait to see more.
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Soooo cute!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. I look forward to seeing what is going to happen next. Mm hm.
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Please continue this cuz I'm so interested in Sasuke's backstory and all and how the others used to treat him. I'm so happy Neji is in it too and a friend no less.:) Please continue?:)
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have GOT to continue this... I'm already giggling and wanting more.

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