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You seriously have me crying. Poor little Naru. ;-;

A very good story. I didn't like the homosexual angle of the story at first, but the story itself rises to the point where I can put my distaste of that to the side very easily, which I cannot say about very many stories with that theme in them.

This was such a sad chapter. D: Stupid Kakashi had to go and mess up. Thank goodness Jiraiya came to save the day. I hope to see some answers from Naru-chan. He needs to talk his emotions out.

This is such an emotional story. It is good to see that Naruto is not the only one that is conflicted. Kakashi is just as messed up. When I started this chapter, I was afraid that Naruto was going to find Kakashi "in bed" with someone else. I am glad I was wrong, but this was just as painfull. I am glad you have brought back in Jiraya and in a small way I am happy that he saw Naruto cutting. Hopefully, he will be able to handle a conversation about it with Naruto that will not push Naruto to close himself off more. I think it will help that Jiraya knew about Minato's cutting in the past.

I cant wait til the next chap. this one made me cry.

Holy sexy hell! This last chapter was sweet, sad, and yummy. I'm officially dubbing the kiss Kakashi gave Naruto "The Water Kiss" and it is now my favortie thing ever. Please update soon because the sexual tension is getting so thick I might snap.

Hey your story is really interesting and well-written. I like the characters so far and the pairing aswell.
Even if I dont know what to think about this whole Minato shares a soul with Naruto and that he had the same problems with hurting himself...
I mean Minato had not the same problems as Naruto why would he do that?
Well thank you for your hard work.
Greetings

I really do love this story. It's so beautifully written. I like the idea of some Kakashi/Naruto in the mix. Update soon!

Yeah ... Naruto got promoted! Can not wait to see how things play out next. I feel bad that Jiraya left without saying anything to Naruto.

I will admit that in general the Jiraya/Naruto pairing is a bit "EEWW!!" for me.... Basically it is the age difference of about 40yrs. I mean really that is boardering on the Grandparent/Granson age range for the ninja world. But I have read some very good stories that bring these two together, so I tend to read a story and see how it all develops.

No one is forcing me (or anyone else) to read your story and I think that it is unrealistic for Readers to expect authors to change their stories to suit their own preferences. I appreciate that you are willing to share your creativity on such sites as this and so far have enjoyed your story.

I am looking forward to your next chapter.

I love this story so much. The last chapter made me so sad. Poor naruto is cutting himself. D: I hope that jiraiya helps heal naru faster. Update soon~