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Oh wow! What an exciting chapter! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens to Iruka and the old man/demon.

Hurray!!! I was so worried that this was gonna wind up another dead fic. I Thanks for the awesome chapter! Your really brought the character of Masao to life.

Nice action-filled chapter. I wonder what the enemies want to do with Iruka before killing him... maybe explain the curse? I hope Kakashi saves Iruka! Just after he opened his heart to him too...

FTW!!!!!!!! KILL THEM ALL FOR HURTING AND TAKING KAKASHI'S PRECIOUS IRUKA AWAY!!!!!!!! ...... OH, and please don't kill Iruka. Iruka and Kakashi need a happy ending! I love your fic by the way, and because I do, I shall speak my praises in Blahenese and then translate in case you don't speak it! ..... Blahblah blahblahblahblah blaaaaaaaaaah blablahblah blah! Translation: You are awesome, keep up the great job on your fic, and I would marry you if I knew who you are!

Ooooo...I really like this. Hope to read more of it soon.

Cool, I feel things are finally coming together. I really like this the mystery and sense of adventure is great in this, also, the relationship you are developing between the two is nice.

Great chapter - both for the romance and plot!
I hope Iruka will be okay until Kakashi joins him... and the nin-dogs too!

But emotional development is good too! I consider that it's part of the plot anyway...
Very nice chapter indeed! I loved to know more about Kakashi's conflicted feelings and how flustered Iruka makes him. But he's such a tease for Iruka in return! And Pakkun's frank insight was quite funny too. Now, will Iruka do something about that revelation...? Also, could the sexual tension hinder their progress? Then, shouldn't they do something about it soon? ;)

This story is progressing nicely.

Well, Iruka messed up this time, but they have actually progressed a lot! They now know that they are both sexually attracted to men, and the porn collection could definitely put Iruka in the mood... After Kakashi forgives Iruka's blunder and if they are not attacked because of it, of course.
You portrayed them very well (definitely how I imagine them to be). I particularly like how Kakashi can go from very serious with killer instincts to goofily proud owner of the biggest porn collection in Konoha. And Iruka is always endearing, even with some of his flaws (like his famous temper). I was as surprised as Iruka by Kakashi's relationship with Asuma, though, but it was fun.
Also, if nothing happens during this mission (with Kakashi), at least Iruka will know that he can try Konoha's higher ranking male shinobi for relationships... But I'd still love to see some action between the two, and more plot development too. :)