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Nice story, I wish it wasn't the end. I would've liked to see Hinata use that stimulating Jyuuken from her penis (Neji said and demonstrated that the Jyuuken can be used from any part of the body during his fight against Kidomaru) and Naruto to use the kage bunshin no jutsu to pound Hinata while she pounds him. I did love the ending joke (which is yet another thing I'd have liked to see). Oh well, can't have it all. However, I did find you lacking descriptions about how Naruto and Hinata were feeling during the sex. In your future fics, please try to describe how the sex feels for both parties. Also, some of Naruto's thought regarding Hinata being a futanari would've been nice. Still, a great job overall, just pointing out some areas to improve upon. I look forward to seeing your next fics and hope you'll come out with one soon!

I now want to see the Naruto/naruko you mentioned breifly in the story as well as a Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi scene

I'd like to see another chapter when Naruko goes all the way with Hinata. I can just imagine the look on Hiashi's face if he walked in on that scene.