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for Keep Your Rival Very, Very Close

by fithablink

person Reicelly
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the one of best short fics I've ever read. Except for some subject-verb agrrement mistakes, the story is well developed even using short sentences in dialogues, making it fairly easy to follow. Love the humor. And, of course, I like the last sentence the best.
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* just had to read it again.I find this so funny and fast paced that I don't even stop to bother beta'ing it because I just want to READ it! :)
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it!!! Both funny and smexy! HA! Poor Sai didn't stand a chance with Sasuke there.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HAHA!! I was laughing all the way through this!1 especially the ending! very enjoyable read I must say Naruto deos =SEX GOD!

schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was just amazingly cute and very good! looking forward to seeing more o your work.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was a Fun Read!! Thanks for sharing!!

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