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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. Awsome work =)
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man, are you EVIL!! I know its unbelievably fun for you to make us squirm, but damn is it frustating! And exciting... I can't wait for your next appearance. Keep up the good work!
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet of Naruto and just like him to give the kids the prizes. The plan worked great he caught Sasuke's eye with all that movement:) I enjoyed ^_^
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story manages to be incredibly hot, even without explicit language; the writing is so good that a lemon would be mind-blowing ! I can hardly wait to read what happens next.
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Sai's take on the happening of the not yet lovers ^_^
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sai he just doesn't get it. BWAHAHAHAHA awesome. I'mso in love with this story you are doing a really great job.
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July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I would knotice subtle touches and flirting. I am so oblivious. LOL Well update again soon please. And your creative genious does show.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's our boys everything must be a competition even touching:) I think that is them to a tee. Sai was pretty insightful knowing that there was underneath the underneath with the boys:) You know what?! That was sexy without sex!! The warmth Sasuke feels when Naruto touches him and the way he watches Naruto mouth. I love it ^_^
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's cute the subtle touching and flirting. I can't wait for more, but I will try.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh. A plotting Sas is a dangerous, dangerous thing. Go Sas. I can't wait till they actually get together. the tension is killing me. *flops in an extreamly amature fake dying attempt at your feet.