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August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Looking foward to the next chapter. The lemon was fine- it managed to skirt that fine line between intimate and cheesy. So I give it two thumbs up- fine family fun.
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August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(Rolling over for a cigarette) Ahhh, absolutely perfect! Thank you !
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! =)
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that was hawt stuff. *nose bleed* You need to make more lemons like that, Lemonade all around. Hope another update is to come.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I said i'd consider strangling you if something went wrong while they were getting together... nothing did so you're all cleaqr. Instead you gaves beautiful, beautiful sasu/naru lemons... and those last couple of lines were just soooooooooo them. *snickers.
Now, pls let them be together for a bit before something rocks the boat. :P
Now, pls let them be together for a bit before something rocks the boat. :P
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would never have guessed that was your first lemon?!?! That was H O T! That was S E X Y! That gave me a bloody nose:) I loved it ^_^
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have searched high and low for something that, for lack of better terminology, does not suck. Yes it has been a loooong search full of disappointment but this story is both written with eloquence as well as with an edge. I feel you have accomplished this thoroughly! Do not doubt yourself. You have a talent so don't hinder your abilities by being your own worst critic. I am very much enjoying this fic. So please don't take too long in updating! ^.^
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are soooooo mean to leave off at that point and leave us hanging!!!! MEAN I TELL YOU!!! I think that falls under unjust punishment of your fans!!!! Ok ....will have to bug you to no end till you update this TODAY!!!!! I know....I'll tell my wonderful daughter to wait on her update till you update....muwhaaaaa lol
LOVED THE UPDATES!!!!!=)
LOVED THE UPDATES!!!!!=)
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awe jeez, you gotta stop cutting it off like that! i've never been a fan of first person stories, but you drew me in anyway.
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well FINALLY. If you have this effort go wrong i may just have to strangle you. The sheer RST (restrained sexual tension) and sheer dencity of these two have me wanting to A, maim them both, b, lock them in a small room together or c, do both.