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for In The Dark

by monochrome

person Jen
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting first chapter! I'd love to read more! I really want to know if it's a monster Sasuke is about to come face to face with, or if this was just a set up for a prank by Itachi. Or maybe it's something else? The cliffhanger is a killer! :D
person smint45
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO not fair!!! You can't end it here!!!! This a really fascinatig start!!!! I want more!!!! Please give me more!!!! See you soon!!!
person moodysavage
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
continue...continue...please please please???!!! I like suspense and this is starting out good!!!!!!!!
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay! You demand reviews, so I shall review. Wtf were you thinking when you left us with THAT cliffhanger?! I demand you update within the next week! It was just getting good... I was hyped up... My heart and breathing had picked up speed, and then "WHAM" we're cut off. Unfair man... I give you a week to write, edit, and get it beta read. So I should see you so... (Stares threatenly)
person nivell
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, you got me there with the cliffhanger! I seriously hope Itachi didn't die.
person Vidori
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me Itachi lives!

Omg, I'm lost to the suspense. >_<
person Anon
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update
person anoibebe
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Have to write MOORRREEE!!! This is really good and for the record...I hate cliffys...but I have made an exception of this story so more pretty please!

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