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Does that mean he would like it if he was hugged 'off' the clock? I get the feeling that he knows Naruto is male because you can feel the difference between real and fake boobs when someone presses them against your chest. Looking foward to your next update!

BOUT DAMN TIME YOU UPDATED! I thought I was never going to see more of this! I only wish this chapter was longer, I didn't want it to end. I didn't see alot in the way of mistakes, but I've been dozing on and off all day, so I could have missed something. Keep up the good work, and please don't leave us hanging for too long?
-Crazy Irish Lass

I love this story! I love stories that feature characters cross-dressing. I don't know why; I just do. Update soon, please.

we'll take what we can get. ^^
I wonder how long it will take for erm Narumi to lose her resentment and settle in. The sooner she does the sooner she can make good money.

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Glad you found my ramblings useful. :) I thought the scene with Neji & Naruto where Neji was sizing him up was quite awesome. Not only do we now have an idea how Naruto will pull this off, but we also know what the "tells" are on his true gender. (I think having this kind of grounding helps keep the story plausible!) Plus master-strategist version Neji stole the scene, which was awesome.

Sounds like Neji managed to pull off the transformation, however. It seems as though he fooled Anko, and probably Kakashi, though I have my suspicions about him. He was perceptive enough to notice that Naruto was somewhat feminine when they first met, will he be perceptive enough to notice that Neji brought him a girl who looks an awful lot like the boy she'd(?) brought in a month earlier...?

Neji did so much for Naruto in this chapter by paying off so many of his debts that I imagine Naruto will need to be employed at the Over-Under for a LONG time in order to pay them all off. Too bad for Sasuke. ;)

this is so cute! but does this mean that Neji's employers don't know that he's male? and he works as a female hostess?

I am really getting into this. Hope more is to come soon please

oh great, naru got the job, want to know what will happen to the ball ?? Congratulation for your promotion !!see you soon

I'm sorry about the loss of your flash drive but I'm glad about your assurance. I also see that you took note to reviewers' comment and perfect the story. Yea, it's not easy for man to disguise as woman. The body structure would give them out. Male are not as soft as female (Male have more muscle while female, body fat). Something isn't right if people look outside the face. I wonder, if Sasuke is attracted to a female Naruto, how he would react when the true Naruto is revealed.

Congratulations for your promotion by the way.