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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome first chapter..... you really have me intrigued.... cant wait to read what happens next
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Um yeah, hot! Continue, please!
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'Kanari' doesn't mean pretty in Japanese. If written in katakana, it means canary. Maybe you were aiming for 'Kireina'?
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'll comment on DA as well, but this is awesome so far XD
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice start... oh the anticipation is building up..please do update soon!
if its okay to ask, what contest are you joining is it a NaruSasu contest? where will i be able to read other stories that are submitted in the contest?
if its okay to ask, what contest are you joining is it a NaruSasu contest? where will i be able to read other stories that are submitted in the contest?