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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I read this and decided I needed to leave a review...which meant I had to try and remember my password for the site.
This was an interesting story to read, and I will admit that given the summary and the title, I thought it would be about Hanabi asking Hinata if there would be room for her in the relationship with Naruto. But I digress, it was also a very good choice to avoid including smut as in this instance it would have distracted from the situation you were dealing with.
Harems are usually not treated this realistic, and I commend you for doing so. Even if it was weird that Hinata decided to give up Naruto, because you never really think about that happening once she's in a relationship.
Anyway, great job and keep up the good work.
This was an interesting story to read, and I will admit that given the summary and the title, I thought it would be about Hanabi asking Hinata if there would be room for her in the relationship with Naruto. But I digress, it was also a very good choice to avoid including smut as in this instance it would have distracted from the situation you were dealing with.
Harems are usually not treated this realistic, and I commend you for doing so. Even if it was weird that Hinata decided to give up Naruto, because you never really think about that happening once she's in a relationship.
Anyway, great job and keep up the good work.