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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person coco
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Poor Naru and s'uke *cries* I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The Shika/Kiba scene gave us a brief comedic moment before the ugly kicks in. We've only got a peek at what's to come and I'm already prepared to cry. Even so I'm still looking for to your next chapter and more.
person smint45
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!!! I'm so happy shika finally got it!!!! otherwise they really would have a problem!!!! And next chappie the torture is about to start, I can't say finally but the faster it starts the faster its over and they will be rescued!!! I hope to see you soon!!!
person Coco
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Sasuke is so devious:) Yay! I absolutely can't wait for more!!!!!!!
person Troopercat
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most entertaining fanfics i've ever read. Can't get enough lol. Keep up the good work.
person ForeverAndEver
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter! I thought it was a nice way of showing the care Sasuke and Naruto have for each other especially given whats going to happen in the next little bit. I thought you got the emotions across and that the chapter progressed well! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters!
person smint45
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just great!!! Sasuke too took it reather well!!!! I so the LEAF agents will find them again!!!!! Please update soon!!!!
person silverfox
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! I laughed out loud when Sasuke tricked Naruto at the end. Heehee. Poor Naruto. I'm worried for them, though. What will happen when Kabuto comes in????? But I can't wait til you update! I like the contrast of Naruto and Sasuke's dynamic in this chapter. One minute they're thick as thieves, reassuring each other, and the next, they're ripped apart, doubt and fear dripping in. It's a little confusing, but makes for an interesting read. XD Update soon, yea?
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I was prepared to be hurt in this chapter. *whew*
I'm sad that you're currently uninspired, but happy all the same for Angel to have a need to bribe you with awesome fanfics to be shared. I hope the plot bunnies attack soon and I'm always looking forward to reading more works by you
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter.... i will go and vote in your poll... i cant wait to read what happens next... please hurry and updae as soon as you can

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