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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person smint45
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was terrible but in a good way ^^ I really like how you play with the emothions!!!! i can't wait for them to be rescued!!! And I totally love the pic of Kyu and Ita ^^ So sweet^^ See you soon!!!
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is really strong to be putting up with such a bad thing. Hope all goes well in the end. Update again soon please.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

How...horrifying.. Really well-written chapter though what they have to go through is sickening. The worst part is that there actually are sick f-ks out there just like this *shivers* Hope they'll be rescued soon!
person alex
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAH KABUTO YOU SICK FUCK!!
i cried.. i hate it I HATE THIS .... i love your writing lol but damn this so horrible
waaaah naruto nooo i love u lol
good job, get those a's before you post these new chapters and make more people cry lol
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES!! We're getting to the heart of the story. So Naruto's wanted for his expertise, eh? Is the person whose coming for Sasuke someone we know, or just some random OC? I can't wait for next week.:). Hope all's well for u lately, miss chatting with u.:3
person silverfox
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was actually scared going into this. :) Wow. As i was reading, I was totally getting swept up into the feelings, the desperation, and the anger. OMG NARUTO! I can't wait for the next chapter, but I just know I'll cry at some point. Poor, poor boys. But at least Shikamaru knows what's going on. :) I love what you did with Sasuke at the end, him screaming and all. Very cool. I can't wait to see what he'll do next. =D I really hope Naruto can get out of this. I know he's strong enough to endure whatever happens, but he has to worry about Sasuke too. Hmmm....
I hope you update soon!
person cynaga
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch. 32] OMG! OMG!
person Carousel
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear me...This last chapter was so sad. D: I'm glad Shika is figuring everything out though. I want to read the torture scene only to get it over with. I just want everyone to be happy again. :/ Please update soon~
person maya
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it can not wait for more. is there a way for me to get an alert when you update?
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow Deep. Hope Naruto really doesn't get raped. Hope more is to come soon.

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