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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, great story!!!
I went and watched the new episode you talked about. Did you notice that when they fell back into the water, the splash was shaped like a heart?!?!

~nekluvshp
nekluvshp@hotmail.com
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love reading vulnerable Sasuke and strong Naruto. Poor Sasuke being terrified about the ride. Thank goodness he rationalized to trust the brothers. I didn't miss his second guessing. Does Itachi have fears as well as Sasuke or is it just Sasuke? I like uke Itachi also to some degree.^^ Other pairings, Kimimaro and Sai or Shino and Haku or kidomaru, maybe?
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! Great codename Kyu!!! It's perfect!!XD
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Naruto is a professional but he also likes Sasuke so his job is nice but of course dangerous. I like the playful way Kyuubi tried to get Itachi to makeout with him, hope to see more of that with them.^^ Where will Naruto suggest they go out to next time? Will there be a possible scare there as well? Sorry for jumping so far ahead but I'm excited about this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! X3
person smint45
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I totally love this story!!!! And Now Naruto knows Orochimaru is after Sasuke since a long time!!!! And they finally get a litle closer!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you again!!!
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter... I love that Kyuubi is bassicaly saying fuck the rules, Itachi is hot! HA! Seems like the sort of thing Kyuubi would do. Poor Naruto, he doesn't stand a chance against a hot innocent Sasuke. Suprised Sasuke didn't mind the panting, touchey feely girls on Naruto...

man I have to catch up on my Naruto!!! They kissed again?! I'm excited just hearing it! LOL
person akira
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sweet chappie update soon!!
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's very much like a 'Time to protect time to kill' Sasu x Naru.
person qwerty
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Love it! Keep going!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The code names made me giggle.

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