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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh poor sasuke.... i cant believe that naruto would go and leave him like that.... i hope that they can go over it.... i really need to know what is going to happen next... please hurry and update as soon as you can
person smint45
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooo you can't just do that!!!! Please ANru has to realize his feelings!!!1 I can't sand for the two of them to not be together!!!! And I hope nothing happens to Sasuke when he is alone on the party!!! Please update soon!!!
person silverfox
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome awesome!!!!! I love dance scenes. Especially SasuNaru dance scenes. They are my drug. *.* I think you portrayed Naruto's shock at being attracted to Sasuke perfectly. I can't wait to see how you have Sasuke convince him that they belong together. ;-) Hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Weeee, this is great. I really wanna see how things weave together towards the end. Kekeke.
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, you won't hear me complaining! So Sasuke doesn't get something he wants. It builds character.

But damn, Naruto in a black fishnet shirt and white skinny jeans? *licks lips lasciviously* Now that's a picnic!
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ARE YFRAKKING KIDDING ME!!!??? I want to cry for him! Poor Sasu! Oh god... how can he even FACE Naruto at school? He initiated it ALL and Naruto ran. I Kyu beats some sense into him. WTF that is just.... messed up.


I loved it. I haven't WAIT for the next chapter. :)
person moodysavage
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww...poor Sasuke!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was really good. I liked seeing Naruto pouting and sulking. I totally liked seeing him forgetting himself enough to dance that way with Sasuke. whoo hoo :) He's attached but I don't think he realized it until now. LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooh I just ache for Naruto & poor Sasuke! Naruto is SO oblivious and Sasuke is scared of being hurt. This will probably get very very ugly but I really really LOVE it.

YAY!!! For Itachi and Kyuubi! Although Kyu is a SMOOTH talker working his way around the rules like that. AND making sure Naruto had a way around too if/when he needs. ;-p

I love it! I can't hardly wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(Fangirl squeal) Yay!
person akira
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwws, this was a nice and sweet chappie.

Update soon !

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