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OMG!!! Why did they have to get shot?!!T.T Now I guess the beans will be spilled on the bros. Is this quickly leading to what we read in the prologue? I'm getting scared now but excited at the same time. I know Kakashi is going to be angry that he wasn't there. Fugaku should be angry with himself for leaving so fast, what was the hurry?? lol.

SERIOUSLY!!! OMG. I just... SERIOSULY???? You had SO better have the next bit written already!!! GAHHHHHHHHHHHH

Jay finnally we get to the action!!!! But sadly for that to happen Mikoto and Fukaku had to die :( But still!!!! I so can't wait for Sasuke and Itachi to find out about Kyuubi and Naruto!!! And that will probably happen in the near future with both their parents dead!!! So please hurry and update soon!!!! I want more!!!!

OMG... i was wondering when you were going to bring Orochimaru into the story... and to have him pose as the Uchiha driver that is awesome..... you totally have me hooked now.... please hurry and update as soon as you can

As characters, I don't think Naruto & Sasuke are moving too fast since they're teenagers and everything is "epic, dramatic, and the end of the world when you're that age," as you said. But to be honest with you, the writing itself is what's gotten too melodramatic for my tastes. I'm referring to stuff like this: "'You are my sun, and I am your moon,' Sasuke said confidently, his burning onyx eyes meeting the cerulean stare again. 'I am only a pale reflection of your light, and I cannot exist without you Naruto.'" No one would *ever* say something like that, least of all a teenager. Honestly, with dialogue like that I almost couldn't finish the chapter. Try and avoid purple prose as much as possible. Instead of setting the mood/tone of a scene, by going overboard, it kills it.

arrgggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very happy for naruto and Sasuke...but...arrrrggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they are gasping for breath... not dead yet. and I can't picture Kakashi being slow to get after them or taking it well that they were murdered on his watch. miraculous save? yes? yes?

awesome chapter just like the rest of them.... i am so glad that kyuubi was able to tell some of the backstory to naruto.... now i just need to know what happens next... please hurry and update as soon as you can

love it, can not eait for more. can you please set up an alert system so that we can find out automatically when you update your stories?

I wonder if Kyuubi realizes the trouble he's just made for poor Naruto. I mean he as much as told Sasuke if you fight him hard enough Naruto won't stop yoou from being part of his life... and now Sasuke gets to plot. Heehee I can't WAIT to see what Sasuke does!!!

Wow finally we know what happend with Naruto!!!1 Though we still need the real details with the agency stuff and nut the Sasuke cut version!!! Was His father an agent for LEAF? And was the one who killed him Orochimaru?? Oh I so can't wait for naruto to tell sasuke how he feels!!! But that will probably very fast lead to the revealing of Kyuu and Naruto and of cause to the scee from the prologe!!!! I so can't wait for more!!! Please update soon!!! See you!!!