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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person moodysavage
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
person Carousel
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D: So angstyyyyyyyyyy! Please let Naru-chan be okay! <3
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have 24 hours!!!! I swear I will hunt you down! that is not a cliff hanger that is.... that is CODE BLUE, get the cart!!! WTF! UGH another wonderful chapter!!!
person smint45
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO YOU CAN'T STOP HERE!!!! YOU JUST CAN'T!!!!!!! So if you don't update really fast I'm gonna be so angry with you!!!! Just leaving us hangin here without knowing if nar is ok!!!! So you have to update!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's sooooo wrong. How can you do this to us?! I hope the next installment will be like tomorrow or something.

As for the Kyu & Naru... One can only hope that they managed to store a weapon somewhere in case of emergencies.

What I can't understand is why Kakashi had not informed them that the parents gave him the slip. He should have been able to notice them missing in the amount of time it took for them to get from the office to the mansion.

Please update soon.
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you know I hate you right now...
person Carousel
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amzing, epic story. I need moreeeeeee! I love all the pairings and just everything. I especially loved what Sasuke said this last chapter: "I am only a pale reflection of your light, and I cannot exist without you Naruto."

More please. <3
person silverfox
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! Poor Mikoto and Fugaku! I hope he just dumps them at the manor, but still alive, that way, Kyuu or Tsunade can heal them. And, no, I don't think Naruto and Sasuke are moving too fast. I think Naruto should struggle a bit more with his emotions, but we all know that when Sasuke wants something, he'll get it. ;-) I can't wait for your next update, I'm waiting for a lot of stories to update right now, and you're the only person who updates frequently. You have my thanks. ^_^ Update soon!
person qwerty
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Not okay! Not okay to end it there! **pouts** Such a good chapter though, so intense!!
Keep going!!
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm so happy Sasuke knows about Naruto. Now he won't be so afraid he's lost him. I don't want Sasuke to feel that way. Hopefully Sasuke can find a way to talk to him and clear the air about their feelings, but I guess all in good time. Is Kisame going to try something again with Sasuke? I kinda like that tension but I guess again one thing at a time,lol.XD

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