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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I'm so glad you didn't kill Naruto off!!! But still the Uchia brothers can't know? You are killing me with suspension!!!! I want more!!!! Please update soon!!!!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was very surprised to hear the 2nd gunshot. I thought this would be where Naruto was to be tortured and he'd tell Sasuke 'this is not a game.' Well I'm definitely relieved that the assasin is dead. I can't wait to see how they live together. That will be fun!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story but I have to ask...where's Kakashi?!? And what the heck was Fugagu thinking leaving Kakashi behind when he was aware that his family was being watched?! Arggggg!!!!!!!
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was good.... i just hope that nothing happened to naruto as the second gunshot rung out from downstairs..... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The dialogue between Naruto and Sasuke was wayyy too cliche and contrived. The whole "I can't leave you" bit has been done a million times. Other than that, the chapter was fine.
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
mkay kashi HAS 2 a least save their dad.
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ACKACKACK!!! OMG, I can't believe Naruto might have gotten shot! O.O NOOOOOO!!!! I hope you update in record time!! Please! Before Naruto dies!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! NOOOOO!!!! Did they really have to die?!! 0.0 Kakashi will be kicking himself now for sure. Damn, I like Kimmimaro as the assasin. I'm excited and afraid for everyone involved and hope to see the next chapter really soon please?:)
Great Chapter!!!
Great Chapter!!!
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....Why why why why....no more please the cliffy are killing me....i can't get enough of this story thou....i love you writing....please update soon...please and thanx you....great job
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're the worst! How could you cut it in this moment? It's unbelieveble!
Gods! This is so cruel....
Gods! This is so cruel....