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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chappie!!! That was great although really sad!!!! I really hope S'uke will be ok!!! Hope that Naruto can help him!!!! Please give us more soon!!! See you!!!
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter is so sad. D: Poor Sasu-chan is so depressed and Itachi-kun is helpless. I hope that things get a bit better for the Uchiha brothers.
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. And I felt so bad for Kakashi.It seems like he's had a sad time of it all the way around.
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As long as Kakashi was with them, I din't see Mama & Papa Uchiha going any where... as soon as they ditched him I went. "Nooo stupid stupid stupid!" I just hope witht he loss of their parents finding out their boyfriends were sent inas their body gaurds isn't going to screw things up too badly.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo! Itachi and Sasuke's parents are dead. D: You're too cruel.
At least the lovers are all right. If any of the lovers die, I'll die too. Be kind...and tell us where Naru got his scars.
At least the lovers are all right. If any of the lovers die, I'll die too. Be kind...and tell us where Naru got his scars.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to throw anything at you, although I am slightly put out at such a short chapter, but I'd rather have a wonderfully written (cuz it was) short chapter than no chapter at all. :) I really like the interactions between Kyuu and Itachi and Naruto and Sasuke. I feel like a kid in a candy store, all wide-eyed and slack jawed, watching them being SO CUTE towards each other. This story is so cute, with just the right amount of angst to make things interesting. I love protective!Naruto. It's amazing. I was surprised (angry) at first when Mikoto died, but by the time Fugaku died, with his last words, I was accepting it. I think the way Fugaku died with Kyuu there was perfect. And Naruto's reaction to it was brilliant. You're the only one of my favorites that's updating right now, so I'm pleased as punch for your fast updates. Keep 'em up! ^_^
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOU! MADE! ME! CRY! But that's a good thing!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm in tears....poor babies.....i thought that at least the dad would make it but alas i was wrong...great chapter...more more more.
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!! Bossy Naruto is sexy! And I think that Uzumakis should tell the truth. Uchihas shouldn't be mad. It was for their own sake after all. GREAT CHAPTER! Sasuke was cute. But how did Fugaku know what Naruto looks like? Mysteries all around.... Can't wait for more!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious... If the father knew just who the Uzumaki's were and suspected their reason for being there, would he not guess that he and his wife were also under protection since Kakashi showed up the same time that the Uzumaki's did? And if he did realize this, why not wait for Kakashi to accompany them when they left?
Speaking of Kakashi, where the heck is he now? Did someone else manage to incapacitate him? I don't think that would be the case because it sounded like Kimimaro had been waiting for an opening where Kakashi happened to have left the Uchiha's unattended, instead of having created the opening himself. Why hasn't Kakashi communicated with anyone or even shown up on the scene at the mansion?
Why would Kyuubi feel the need to hide who he and Naru really are? The Uchiha boys are bound to find out sooner or later if they plan to build a life with them. Also, what exactly is there to hide about who the Uchiha boys are? Itachi has already figured out that he and his brother are not targets for some reason. Is there more to it than that? Keeping them in the dark does not seem right.
As always, can't wait for the next update.
Speaking of Kakashi, where the heck is he now? Did someone else manage to incapacitate him? I don't think that would be the case because it sounded like Kimimaro had been waiting for an opening where Kakashi happened to have left the Uchiha's unattended, instead of having created the opening himself. Why hasn't Kakashi communicated with anyone or even shown up on the scene at the mansion?
Why would Kyuubi feel the need to hide who he and Naru really are? The Uchiha boys are bound to find out sooner or later if they plan to build a life with them. Also, what exactly is there to hide about who the Uchiha boys are? Itachi has already figured out that he and his brother are not targets for some reason. Is there more to it than that? Keeping them in the dark does not seem right.
As always, can't wait for the next update.