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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person smint45
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was so sad!!! I really hope Sasuke will come around!!! I can't stand to see Naru hurting like that!!!! Please let them get over this crisis!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you again next week!!!
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a very tense chapter. I feel so bad for Sasuke, he's so angry. Will he tell Naruto why at some point and talk everything out? I hope Naruto's able to get something from him when they get home. I'm glad Naruto can see how Kyuu felt with him a long time ago, maybe Naruto can make a breakthrough with his therapy sessions soon. Will Kakashi be coming back soon? I wish Naruto could just give Sasuke a hug and make everything better.
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeaaaah! They haven't kissed yet! That will be one He'll of a kiss. OMG!! I bet that will be how Sasuke lightens up!! O.O ^^
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As sad as this chapter was, I enjoyed it as always. Looking forward to the next one! :)
And yeah, I'd noticed the lack of kissing... But can you really blame them? Makes it more realistic at any rate :P
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. He had his happiness for what? Five minutes? Fifteen? And then once again he is alone. He should give Sasuke some space, leave him to sleep alone in his bed and move to the couch or to the floor or something, just to see if Sasuke would even notice... Naruto doesn't deserve such a treatment. He killed the guy who had killed their parents and saved them. Sasuke could think about it.... but he always was a bastard after all.
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHH!! Poor Naru.. Poor Sasuke! I love your Itachi in this story. I love seeing him as the protective loving big brother. *sighs* well done!!
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*want more want more want more* oh wait... was I thinking out loud? sorry. I like how Sasuke's behavior now is a parallel for how Naruto was in the past when he shut everyone out. He can understand what is happening but knows that he may not be able to do anything about it. The one difference though is that they love each other not as family but as a couple. That seems like such an inadequate description... a couple... but you know what I mean lol. Awesome as always :)
person silverfox
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They haven't kissed yet? *goes back to check...* Holy cow, you're right, they haven't. o.O Well, okay, apparently you've got a plan. I bet its gonna be awesome! Hope you update soon!
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm SO behind on my reading but OMG I just want to cuddle Sasuke up tight and really do the same for Itachi... they're so lost and broken and in shock and I worry about what sort os strain this is going to put on Naruto and Sasuke...
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the vulnerability of the bros. Uchiha. I find it so adorable even under the sad circumstances. Poor Kakashi got ripped a new one. He's grieving as well and hopefully Iruka can comfort him soon. Will there be a bit of a lull between now and the next I incident? Will they be able to grieve before Orochimaru strikes again?

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