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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A Snuggly Saturday and a Manic Monday...yeah...I'm not that great with titles so instead I'll just say how much I am loving this story and the play on characters...I'm not usually a ItaKyuu/KyuuIta fan but you make it work well. I am confused about one thing though...does Sasuke know that Naruto's a secret agent and actually 19 yet? I haven't picked up that he does know but...everything that happened with his parents would have made it pretty hard to conceal...anyways, loving the story, keep writing and I honestly can NOT wait for the next chapter. xoxo Greyspell
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 18
CURRENTLY IN SHOCK!!
CURRENTLY IN SHOCK!!
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you just keep sucking me in... its such cheating!! GAH!! more now... *demanding stomp*
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap 20
This chapter was so full of sadness and grief....you could feel how empty Sasuke is feeling and dead to the world inside....as well as how worried Naruto is and his feeling of helplessness. I think you did an amazing job turning Sasuke into the bastard we all know and love.
This chapter was so full of sadness and grief....you could feel how empty Sasuke is feeling and dead to the world inside....as well as how worried Naruto is and his feeling of helplessness. I think you did an amazing job turning Sasuke into the bastard we all know and love.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap 21 Guilt
I liked how the chapter developed and could see how difficult it all was for Naruto to talk about and even more so for Sasuke to hear. Its like a double edge sword....you want to know the truth...but when you hear it you wish you didn't know and could go back to living in the dark about it. I think the biggest thing Naruto is keeping from Sasuke is just how he was tortured....I get the impression...his first time.....was at the hands of the snake freak and that as such a young boy the trauma would leave lasting scars that would never heal. Some scars don't ever heal and can never be repaired no matter how much time passes. He can sometimes ignore the pain or distract himself from it with keeping himself busy and focused in life...but he will always run into triggers that call the memory to mind and then the battle will start all over again for him to try and forget and to suppress it. Its a fight he never completely get away from.
I liked how the chapter developed and could see how difficult it all was for Naruto to talk about and even more so for Sasuke to hear. Its like a double edge sword....you want to know the truth...but when you hear it you wish you didn't know and could go back to living in the dark about it. I think the biggest thing Naruto is keeping from Sasuke is just how he was tortured....I get the impression...his first time.....was at the hands of the snake freak and that as such a young boy the trauma would leave lasting scars that would never heal. Some scars don't ever heal and can never be repaired no matter how much time passes. He can sometimes ignore the pain or distract himself from it with keeping himself busy and focused in life...but he will always run into triggers that call the memory to mind and then the battle will start all over again for him to try and forget and to suppress it. Its a fight he never completely get away from.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naruto's past trauma....these are a list of the songs that come to mind.
What kids go through-
Hell if for children by Pat Benatar
We Are By Ana Johnsson
Concrete Angel By Martina McBride
The pain they feel-
I can't do this by Plumb
I'm Not Alright by Sanctus Real
I Stand Alone- (sorry I have no idea who sings this)
Stand In The Rain by Superchick
Beauty From Pain by Superchick
Strength to go on-
Courage by Superchick
Last Night You'll Spend Alone by Skillet
Never Alone by BarlowGirl
Looking forward to-
There Will Be A Day by Jeremy Camp
What Faith Can Do by Kutless
Days you feel strong and can take on the world-
Outcast by Kerrie Roberts
Avalanche by Manafest
When you want to sing cause your happy your alive-
Manifesto by The City Harmonic
Maybe its just me...but I have many songs that go through my head when I read very intense stories that just pulls at my heart and makes me cry with it.
What kids go through-
Hell if for children by Pat Benatar
We Are By Ana Johnsson
Concrete Angel By Martina McBride
The pain they feel-
I can't do this by Plumb
I'm Not Alright by Sanctus Real
I Stand Alone- (sorry I have no idea who sings this)
Stand In The Rain by Superchick
Beauty From Pain by Superchick
Strength to go on-
Courage by Superchick
Last Night You'll Spend Alone by Skillet
Never Alone by BarlowGirl
Looking forward to-
There Will Be A Day by Jeremy Camp
What Faith Can Do by Kutless
Days you feel strong and can take on the world-
Outcast by Kerrie Roberts
Avalanche by Manafest
When you want to sing cause your happy your alive-
Manifesto by The City Harmonic
Maybe its just me...but I have many songs that go through my head when I read very intense stories that just pulls at my heart and makes me cry with it.
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap. 23
I really liked this chapter and I think you did an amazing job for Kuu's and Itachi's first time together......wicked grin.....just loved how Itachi took matters into his own hands!! =)
Think Naruto is going to have a tough time keeping Sasuke pure till his birthday though!!lol
Ya know he could always gift Sasuke with himself for a birthday present!!! hehehe and it would totally serve him right for making Sasuke wait so long!! Lol =) ^-^ hehe
I really liked this chapter and I think you did an amazing job for Kuu's and Itachi's first time together......wicked grin.....just loved how Itachi took matters into his own hands!! =)
Think Naruto is going to have a tough time keeping Sasuke pure till his birthday though!!lol
Ya know he could always gift Sasuke with himself for a birthday present!!! hehehe and it would totally serve him right for making Sasuke wait so long!! Lol =) ^-^ hehe
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I cant wait for the next chapter your such a good writer!
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 10
I have been reading this when ever I get a chance and usually its before work so I don't always leave a note cause I'm so hooked on the story and characters that I usually read till I'm almost late and leave the computer up off I go....but have to say.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I enjoy the character development and how you have developed the story line so far!!! Love the party and how Naruto and Sasuke got Kiba and Nara together!!! I am looking forward to how they get them to realize how they feel and to stop blowing it all off. I am worried on how the story will end though....cause with the start and title it has me worried.....PLEASE don't kill Naruto off .....PLEASE!!!! I'll cry my head off and be depressed for days if you do!!! But I am excited to see what happens next!! LOVE IT!! :) This is just so much FUN to read!
I have been reading this when ever I get a chance and usually its before work so I don't always leave a note cause I'm so hooked on the story and characters that I usually read till I'm almost late and leave the computer up off I go....but have to say.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I enjoy the character development and how you have developed the story line so far!!! Love the party and how Naruto and Sasuke got Kiba and Nara together!!! I am looking forward to how they get them to realize how they feel and to stop blowing it all off. I am worried on how the story will end though....cause with the start and title it has me worried.....PLEASE don't kill Naruto off .....PLEASE!!!! I'll cry my head off and be depressed for days if you do!!! But I am excited to see what happens next!! LOVE IT!! :) This is just so much FUN to read!
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Valentines Day
This was so Sweet and Adorable!!! You can see the depth of each character and feel how happy or sad they are. This is just so much fun to read!! I feel so bad for Naruto and know he so did not want to tell Sasuke where he was going.....who would in that kind of situation......though he is our beloved dense loveable guy who can't see the truth of Sasuke's feeling even with him standing right before him!! So CUTE!!!
This was so Sweet and Adorable!!! You can see the depth of each character and feel how happy or sad they are. This is just so much fun to read!! I feel so bad for Naruto and know he so did not want to tell Sasuke where he was going.....who would in that kind of situation......though he is our beloved dense loveable guy who can't see the truth of Sasuke's feeling even with him standing right before him!! So CUTE!!!