rate_review Reviews

OMG for a moment I thought you were going to say you quit writing, my heart stopped for a moment{i was like nnnnooooo}I'm so happy I'm a member of y gallery. Please don't stop writing anytime soon. Good NaruSasu fics are hard to find.

I really loved this story and I'm glad you posted the last chapter. It was such a brilliant story and I think it showed the true depths of submission. I enjoyed it very much and I hope you stay on this site since you are one of my favorite authors.

2 things:

1) Great story. Truly. Your writing is really good and I'm glad that you were able to finish your story.

2) I think you need to get over being butt-hurt about getting called out on the Asian eyes comment. Fact was (and yes I'm Asian, thanks) it was racist and perpetuated the stereotype that "Asian" eyes are small. I'm not calling you a racist - I'm calling your comment racist. There's a difference. Instead of automatically getting all angry and offended, you should think about the people that YOU offended with your remarks and think about how they felt. Put yourself in their shoes. Yes your INTENT wasn't racist or meant to hurt anyone but the fact of the matter is that the IMPACT of your words hurt some of your readers and you need to address that instead of brushing off their feelings by calling them idiots.

Wow, your flaming reviews were kind of crazy, I think. I did not even know how you could be called racist because of one line out of an eight chapter story about BDSM. Way to focus, huh? I can see how the line could be misconstrued but to go on a rant about it is a bit much. There is truth to all stereotypes, whether it's Asian's having small eyes or black people loving fried chicken, which is a fact oddly enough for my family. I think you are an very gifted and talented writer and I have enjoyed every story that you have written except for maybe the ItaNaru ones and I am sad that the comments here and the attitude of some of the reviewers here has made you feel unwelcome. You made a story about a subject that I don't necessarily understand or agree with both interesting and compelling. I don't agree with everything that Naruto did to Sasuke but I did love the internal struggle that Sasuke had to break down his walls and let someone else in and take control.

To all the readers who didn't agree with Naruto or his demands, isn't that kind of the point? If you don't agree with BDSM, then you are not going to agree with everything that was done. She told you flat out what this was going to be and if you can't respect that then stop reading.

Love it! I normally don't read stories like this, but I love how you write and gave it a try, and I really enjoyed it! Hope you're back writing on AFF, I really enjoy your work.

I'm really sorry that people were saying that about you.I don't find your stories offense in anyway.I really like this story because I didn't know anything about this life-style.It was very intersting to see.Also, the link to the other website on your page doesn't work

If i had startes reading this with any less chapters in its repitoire, I would have been left with a case of imaginary lady blue balls but this was the perfect stopping point and I'm so.excited to read more---half of the time I've been reading this has left me holding my breath for what was coming next.

more, more and more!! (please) i can't wait to see how this ends!

Finally! Woo what a hot scene this was, expertly done. I can`t wait for the next chap!

wow, this fic is just intense, keep it up, you have great character development going on w/c is hard to find in fics...