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by Darkprism

person Ajablue
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I was not ready for this chapter to be over. *continues trying to find more underneath the review button* So lovely and poor little Haku. Heehee to the plastic fishies and flamingo. Definitely deserving of a more coherent review, but ah well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person nivell
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, deep and heavy chapter. Wonder what Haku went through during Zabuza's time for him to react like that.
person qwerty
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Haku! Poor guy. I just want to hold him!
Great chapter!
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So much barely-corralled emotion! Please, please let Itachi escort them all upstairs for some much-needed release!
person melvinssyn
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear God, I love you!! I love how you keep us trembling with anticipation. I feel blind folded with ears plugged. It is it's own bliss. Thank-you!!!!
person qwerty
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm on pins and needles for them! I hope everything goes well!!
Great chapter!
person foreploy
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is dead. Finished chapter 11 and I'm dumbstruck. I want more. I want it to never end. I want Kimi and Haku and Itachi to exist in this story forever. I want to have your babies. I apologize for my review being nonsensical babble. <3 Write on amazing author.
person Carousel
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was so wonderful and sweet. <3 Kimi and Haku are so adorable together and I'm sure Itachi will be very pleased. Update soon!
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Itachi has Haku in a tizzy and he's never even laid a hand on him! Now that's a gift!
person Shivawn
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a spectacular story. It's so emotional, dark and light, pure if that makes sense. One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I can't wait for more and to see what Haku decides, for if Haku says no then Kimimaro will say no, no matter how much he wants Itachi. I also have a feeling (which may be just wishful thinking) that Zabuza and Orochimaru will be making an appearance at some point.

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