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I came back to the internet to find 2 new chapters. I was sooooo excited, anyho really great job and thanks for the explanation on why Inoichi. I was like WOW he actually gave up his life? I thought he would be the one to just brush it off and cling to life, I didn't really like him but this made me almost cry for his loss. Then in the spacer chappie, when Sasuke was thinking how Shikamaru is going to have to tell the children someday of their loss, I got really sad T_T. Also, I think I'm like your Naruto cause I'm starting to think the feral children should stay, lol.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Ebisu is free -- and safe! Redemption.

Absolutely wonderful! Justice was not blind on that day:) Boy will the Mayor be furious!! Yea Baby:) That was another masterpiece there were so many people and places. You make it seem so real and free flowing. Heaven knows it's n o t:) Thank you for your hard work Space Queen of the Naruto Universe ^_^

yea!! Justice is served! ..now we need to get rid of that woman...there must be some dirt on her somewhere that can be used to discredit her and get her out of the office..

i forgot to mention with everything else yay the threesome is getting a baby yay baby (and screentime)

Oh this was a great chapter, after all the nail-biting cliffhangers and the excitement and sadness of battle, it is very much appreciated. I especially loved Sasuke's reaction to Sakura, who knew she was such a fangirl??!!(although I might react the same way..lol)and also his reaction to H, F & T request, which was a huge surprise, but looking forward to more about that upcoming event. I read it twice through and I'll probably read it a third time...because I sincerely wish he had gave into his need to tickle Shikamaru "until he wet his pants"...I love that even though he has so much responsibility, so much depending on him..you still give us glimpses of his humour and youth :)

The closing scene was beautiful. I love to see them like this. They hardly get a chance these days to be like this with everything that is going on in their lives. Now they know that Oro is alive and super-mega obssesed with Naru. Sasuke better keep his eyes peeled and ready, we don't want Oro to get the drop on them. Awesome job as always and waiting for the next installment. Hugs!

Sincerely

Moonmoore

Wow! What an emotional charged ending, it brought tears to my eyes. Shika is so smart and just know how to handle stuff. He is a crucial part in the new Uchiha. He paractically solves all their problems. I wish that Neji were better at understanding him so that he wouldn't need Darrent. I hope their relationship keeps growing. Poor Sasuke, he was manipulated once again. No wonder neither of them said anything. Those two can really do some mischief if they wanted. It was really nice to see the children and the adults interaction with them. Sakura made me flinch at first as she came out first as a fangirl but I'm glad she matured and left that phase. Great job! See you next time!

Sincerely


Moonmoore

yes they did it !! they won the battles and saved thousand hybrid. I love your story !!! see you soon

I like what you did with Sakura. I'm not a fan of hers but this was nice. I do so love your spin on all the Naruto characters you add:) The old fighters really surprised me wanting a child! I enjoyed it totally ^_^